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Town Square Poets - Spin a Poetic Yarn

Original post made by Claudette McDermott, Del Prado, on Mar 10, 2010

It's beautiful outside between the rain and sunshine, creativity is in the air. How about some poetry this week? Post it here, keep it clean and express yourself ~ Beginner, Intermediate and Professional Poets welcome ~


I stare at the flickering light
Dancing about in this cold windy cave
Water lapping at its knees
Gapping mouth that will house
All who venture too far out
On a day such as this

Like a trapped bird
I bounce off the walls
Trying to miss the waves
Cutting me to the quick
Like a sharpened blade off the shelf
On a day such as this

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Posted by Claudette McDermott
a resident of Del Prado
on Mar 10, 2010 at 12:38 pm

Claudette McDermott is a registered user.

Would you like to gather in person, downtown and have a workshop then share our poetry? I would like to meet once a month to share and workshop poetry if I can get together 5 or more people interested. E-mail me

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Posted by PTown Poet
a resident of California Reflections
on Mar 11, 2010 at 2:37 pm

Chasing the Rainbow
It’s just out of grasp
Skinned my knee
Time to flee
If I jump I’ll catch the tail
If not I shall surely fail
How can I get to the end
Like Right Now
I’m feeling stressed
I want to howl
To be the Best
I must be much Better
Look over my shoulder
At the other feller
Chasing and running
I’m running out of breath
To Catch the Rainbow
Will be my Death

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