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harmed? or not?

Original post made by Elaine Lee on Apr 9, 2009

this is a true story about how i, as a kid, and a baby, enjoyed school!I sure hope you enjoy this.

once, as i walked to school on a monday morning, a bully just came up to me and bullied me by taking my lunch away. during lunch, i had no lunch, and my friends didn't even care. what friends i had. i felt so bad for myself. i should've stood up to him and told him: "BACK OFF!" maybe then, i wouldn't have lost my lunch. my stomache was starving! my brain was moving back and forth. i didn't know what to do. my friend, cade, was the one who happened to help me later that day. he comforted me in every way he could. he said it's okey, dont worry. and that actually made me feel much much better! suprisingly, the bully was my friend, michael. he just dressed up as a bully and came up to me and bullied me. they planned this!!! i could not believe this! oh well...

Elaine Lee

Comments (9)

Posted by arthur, a resident of Downtown
on Apr 9, 2009 at 10:37 am

ilove ur story! it actually happened to me too!!!

Posted by Cathy's Son, a resident of Mohr Elementary School
on Apr 9, 2009 at 10:49 am

Hi Elaine,

Something similar once happened to me, but when I told this story to a doctor friend of mine, he was concerned and suggested I see a specialist. Turns out the brain is not actually supposed to move back and forth like that. Now I watch FoxNews and no longer have that problem.

Best of luck!

Posted by ti, a resident of Stoneridge
on Apr 9, 2009 at 1:24 pm


Posted by AVHS Dad, a resident of Stoneridge Park
on Apr 9, 2009 at 2:06 pm

AVHS Dad is a registered user.

"dressed up as a bully"?

Posted by Cholo, a resident of Livermore
on Apr 9, 2009 at 5:16 pm

What a sick thing to write about. Are your parents NUTS that they allow you to post such a sick story? It's about SADISM more than anything.

Posted by addy, a resident of Del Prado
on Apr 9, 2009 at 6:35 pm

you should get your brain checked out...maybe a tumor or something

Posted by Cholo, a resident of Livermore
on Apr 9, 2009 at 9:27 pm

Get lost creep! Are you a sadist or something?

Posted by holly, a resident of Foothill Farms
on Apr 15, 2009 at 9:52 am

wow. it's tax season and you make people more sad.

good job.

Posted by AVHS Dad, a resident of Stoneridge Park
on Apr 16, 2009 at 3:39 pm

AVHS Dad is a registered user.

It's good to see Creative Writing is alive and well in Pleasanton.

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